Sun Rash

An attempt at something more challenging. I normally incorporate a fairly basic rhyme scheme if any in my works. So I thought I would change things with this one. I had a far more complex version that had 7 different rhyming pairs that were evenly attached to the 4-5 line stanzas and my head nearly exploded once I got to the third stanza. A bit more simple to digest was 4on4 with a different rhyming pair per stanza. Simple enough, the real challenge in the end was to find 3 other words that rhyme with achievement. ~_~

Here is how the number scheme went if you are having some difficulty understanding (The numbers have words that rhyme on the last word in each line)
1
2
3
2

4
1
2
1

2
3
4
3

3
4
1
4